Rewrite onboarding prose to a neutral voice

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FanaticPythoner (Nathan Trudeau)
2026-04-26 12:26:19 -04:00
parent a591cd21f2
commit e27c8a2bd6
16 changed files with 69 additions and 70 deletions

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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Covers the full PKCE login flow (authorize → callback → token
exchange → userinfo → persist), transparent refresh, logout, and
the idempotent "already authenticated" short-circuit.
No real network calls. No browser required: we simulate the
No real network calls. No browser required: the test simulates the
browser by doing an HTTP GET to the authorize endpoint; the mock
server 302-redirects to the loopback callback, which
`forge_auth.run_login` is already listening on.
@@ -44,14 +44,14 @@ def _free_loopback_port() -> int:
class _MockBrowser:
"""Drive the authorize endpoint on a worker thread.
We wait a fraction of a second for `run_login` to bind its
The worker waits a fraction of a second for `run_login` to bind its
loopback callback server, then GET the authorize URL. The mock
server redirects us to the callback; following the redirect
server redirects to the callback; following the redirect
causes `run_login`'s callback handler to fire, and the auth flow
completes.
urllib's default opener follows redirects automatically, which is
exactly what we want here: one GET, one automatic redirect, done.
the required behavior here: one GET, one automatic redirect, done.
"""
def __init__(self, authorize_url: str, delay_seconds: float = 0.2) -> None:
@@ -111,14 +111,14 @@ class ForgeAuthIntegrationTests(unittest.TestCase):
# Helpers
# -----------------------------------------------------------------
def _login(self) -> fa.AuthFile:
"""Run run_login() with an auto-browser that does the GET for us."""
"""Run run_login() with an auto-browser issuing the authorize GET."""
with mock.patch.dict(os.environ, self.env, clear=True):
config = fa.ForgeAuthConfig.from_env()
# We need to start the mock "browser" AFTER run_login
# The mock browser starts AFTER run_login
# prints the authorize URL but BEFORE it blocks on the
# loopback server. Since run_login prints then blocks
# synchronously, we can intercept webbrowser.open to
# synchronously, the code intercepts webbrowser.open to
# kick off the GET at exactly the right moment.
browser_holder: dict[str, _MockBrowser] = {}
@@ -240,8 +240,8 @@ class ForgeAuthIntegrationTests(unittest.TestCase):
def test_callback_state_csrf_mismatch_raises(self) -> None:
"""A tampered state on the callback must raise.
We cannot easily tamper with the real PKCE flow end-to-end,
so we exercise verify_state directly: the `run_login` path
The real PKCE flow is not easily tampered end-to-end here,
so the test exercises verify_state directly: the `run_login` path
wires it straight through.
"""
key = b"\x01" * 32